January 25, 2009

Tenchi Muyo GXP -- The Lorelei and the Diplomat

Ubu and  I have been having a conversation in his comments here about the ending of Tenchi Muyo: GXP. In one of my comments I touched on something I'd thought of before, and wanted to expand on it here. It's all spoilers, so it's below the fold.

The entire decoy ship program is an important one for the GP, but for anyone except Seina victories are going to be pretty rare events. I've speculated that crew on decoy ships are paid a bounty for every pirate ship they bag (with the skipper getting the largest share of the bounty) as a way of giving them an incentive to be aggressive.

Decoy ships are purpose built, to give off the energy signature of a cargo ship while carrying heavy enough weapons and screens to be able to fight and win against pirates. But that doesn't leave any extra room or power for a huge crew or lots of extra holding space. The design of decoy ships is a huge specialization process, and those things can't be fit in.

So there must be a substantial support structure in place, probably a dedicated fleet from the GP navy. When a decoy ship defeats a pirate, it calls in its position. The support fleet will then send a couple of regular navy ships out to take responsibility for the pirate, and to escort it to a GP port somewhere so that its crew can be processed and imprisoned, or whatever else might be done with them. Once the Navy shows up, the decoy ship is then free to continue on its way.

I figure a typical decoy ship may manage 3-6 victories in a year and a really successful one maybe twice that, which means the bounty must be pretty substantial in order to make it worthwhile. Why would anyone be motivated to take extra risks for $50 or $100 extra per year? Of course, they're also getting hazardous duty pay, but that's constant, and thus only an incentive to be part of the crew, not an incentive to be aggressive. Hence a bounty. (The easiest way to handle it would be to make it a fixed duration of extra pay, i.e. an extra two weeks for each pirate ship.)

One of the reasons that Seina becomes famous so soon is that from the very beginning he bags pirates dozens at a time, and does so every couple days. Every time he calls in they have to dispatch a significant squadron rather than just one or two ships.

All the men serving in the support fleet are going to know about him really soon, because it doesn't let up. As long as he's patrolling he's pulling the pirates in dozens at a time.

That's also why Seina's bank account is so great: the bounty money must really have piled up (and the GP is more than glad to reward him that way). Just the interest on that was enough to make his parents quite wealthy when Kiriko started sending it to them. (And that's why the three stooges were so happy when their pay came in the first time; they saw all the bounty money.)

I suspect that it wouldn't have taken long (like maybe a week) before the GP realized that Seina needed his own support fleet. For a while, at least, Seto's Jurai fleet would have helped out, but eventually the GP would have had to pick up the load. So the existing one would continue to support all the other decoy ships, and a new one would be created, probably much larger than the other, just to support Seina. Which would be another reason for his growing notoriety as a pirate hunter. (And would explain why he was getting paid at the rate of a fleet admiral: in practice he was in command of that fleet even if not in name. They went where he told them, when he told them.)

Now we enter into "what comes next" mode, after the ending of the series. Seina is a diplomatic carrot of unfathomable value for Seto, because everyone out there has pirate problems which seem intractable, and only Seina seems to have the solution. Seto is going to use Seina as a diplomatic reward for other stellar empires who make nice to her. Word will get around about the effectiveness of the Lorelei (Seto will make sure of it) and those who want to borrow him will have to make very nice. He's going to be Seto's primary tool for advancing her political project of uniting the entire galaxy into a single Federation, which will be led primarily by Jurai and the Kuramitsu's.

Because he's third in line of succession for the throne of Jurai, any time he visits a planet outside Jurai/GP territory, even if only for shore leave or resupply, it will be treated as a state visit, with the kind of security you'd expect to be deployed for someone as important as he is. Jurai Secret Service agents will go first and check the place out. Probably GP personnel will have to go settle a bunch of things, too.

That would have been justified for him anyway as the one and only irreplaceable Lorelei, but having him in the Jurai line of succession gives them a better excuse for it.

And if he's loaned to some other stellar empire to exterminate their pirates, his entire support structure will have to come with him. A big GP fleet will be part of the deal. All of this is part of Seto's "offer they can't refuse". It's all or nothing, and if they don't agree to all of it, then Seina will be assigned to hunt pirates somewhere else more willing to compromise. (It's not like there's any shortage of work for him to do.) For all the other empires out there in pirate pain, it's not just about getting on his assignment list. They're going to be competing with each other to try to get him as early as possible. He's under GP command but in practice it'll be Seto who makes the decisions about where he goes -- and she'll make sure that everyone knows that, too. (Having in him the line of succession will justify that, too.)

Of course, it's possible in some cases that some (though not all) of the naval support will be native, but that too works for Seto. The native naval support will have to be integrated into the GP fleet and cooperate with it for the duration; the GP will be in overall command. (Another "take it or leave it".) And that kind of military cooperation also helps grease the diplomatic gears by letting the other empire see the way the GP fleet is run.

It took Seina about a year to wipe out the pirates in the territory where the GP operates. For a smaller federation it'll at least take him three or four months, and all the coordination involved in getting him there and supporting him while he's doing it will open lots and lots of communications and personal relationships, and drastically increase trust and friendship, all of which will aid Seto in trying to convince that empire to join in the Federation.

Seto means to go down in history as the woman who united the Galaxy. And Seina will go down in history as the man who made it possible for her to do it. She's more than willing to share that fame with him.

UPDATE: Just in passing, I might mention that all of this is at least initially going to make Seina extremely uncomfortable. And eventually it's going to occur to him that he can resign from the succession.

When that happens, or perhaps before that, Neige is going to sit down with the rest of the family and explain the facts of life to them, and make clear to Seina how vitally important it is that he remain in the succession. She's a sharp operator and will have figured all of it out long since.

She's not Seto's tool. Her loyalty is to her new family, her husband and co-wives (and Fuku). But as all of them are members of the GP, then being part of a project to unite the entire galaxy peacefully through diplomacy is a noble assignment and she'll work towards that goal. Keeping Seina in the Jurai line of succession is a big piece of that for a number of reasons, and she'll make sure he doesn't resign.

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Interesting hypothesis, though that probably is more than what Masaki Kajishima thought about the topic.

Not to mention the whole

C.T.

Posted by: cxt217 at January 25, 2009 08:51 PM (ypRP3)

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He didn't write GXP. Nabeshin wrote it. And there are hints that he did think about some of these things.

Posted by: Steven Den Beste at January 25, 2009 09:06 PM (+rSRq)

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Nabeshin may have written the script, but the plotline was probably given to him by Kajishima and Yosuke Kuroda (That was similar to how Kuroda did script work on the original TMR series - the plot and much of scriptwork was already done by the time the writers came onboard.).

There is also the fact that:

C.T.

Posted by: cxt217 at January 25, 2009 09:26 PM (ypRP3)

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I just don't see the TM people interfering as much as you do, or really giving much of a damn. And even if they did, I can't see them objecting to Seto's program. Why would they?

Posted by: Steven Den Beste at January 25, 2009 10:18 PM (+rSRq)

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Posted by: metaphysician at January 25, 2009 10:28 PM (h4nEy)

6 I don't even see Tenchi & the 3 Sisters being on the same level as Seina & co. 

Anyway, one of  the corollaries that I alluded to in the other discussion is that . Makes you wonder if his luck changed or not.

Posted by: ubu at January 25, 2009 11:06 PM (aztRh)

7 The chances of Tenchi and company getting as power players are slim to none, largely because they generally don't care.

Seto, on the other hand, is passionate about this. She likes political moving and shaking (possibly even for its own sake), and a unified galactic federation would give her a bigger sandbox to play in if nothing else. She also has a deep and abiding hatred of space pirates for personal reasons. She has plenty of reasons to want the sort of things Steven is writing about here, she's the kind to go after it, and since he can make it happen, Seina is a dream come true for her.

( Idly, who else would want to see Seto and Seina take a boat trip off the coast of Somalia? )

Posted by: Xivilai at January 26, 2009 12:13 PM (IQij+)

8 *raises hand*  Me, me!

Posted by: metaphysician at January 26, 2009 12:56 PM (h4nEy)

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Washu is interested in Seina.

It's part of her particular approach to the search for a superior one. Just because she finally found him (Tenchi) doesn't change her interest in looking at others for who the rules don't work, and it's likely she's been watching Seina for a long time.

When Seto came to Washu to beg her for a ship which could survive having Seina as its captain, I think she was already inclined to help. Partly that was because Seina was Tenchi's friend, and partly it was because she's not unsympathetic to Seto's grand plan to unite the galaxy. But I do think it was mostly because Seina is one of those rare and (to Seto) extremely valuable people for whom cause-and-effect doesn't fully apply, and she wants to study him and to make his power fully blossom.

Of the people in that household, Washu is the one who will be most involved with what Seina is doing. I have a suspicion that she's getting regular telemetry from Fuku. (She gets that from Ryoko and Ryo-Ohki, and it seems like the kind of thing she'd include in Fuku too.)

But I don't think she'll interfere, beyond her already great interference in giving Fuku to Seina.

I also think that there's going to be a great deal of quiet pride for her in having Fuku be a major contributor to the unification of the galaxy. Seina couldn't do what he's been doing without Fuku, and everyone knows it.

Everyone else in that household knows Seina and likes him. I simply can't see any of them getting involved to derail the project or to interfere with Seina's career.

(I'm not sure that Mihoshi knows him. But Mihoshi knows Amane, and she's a loyal member of the GP. She isn't going to consciously impede Seina and his team as they carry out the greatest and most glorious single project in GP history. (What she does unconsciously, on the other hand, is anyone's guess.)

As to Tsunami? Her approach to the search was to engage in breeding experiments with the Masaki lineage. Her means to do that was via her control over her offspring trees. The Masaki clan judges the importance of members based on the rank of tree that they get (or the fact that they don't get one) and ultimately it's been Tsunami who has been making that decision. So, for instance, she gave Yosho a first generation tree, because she judged his lineage to be the one available to her most likely to yield what she was looking for. (Which is what happened.)

Anyway, Tsunami herself doesn't really have any interest in Seina one way or the other. As observed by others, "fighting pirates" and "uniting the galaxy" are unimportant details for her.

But Sasami likes Seina and that's a good enough reason to help him out. So when Kiriko went in for a tree selection, Tsunami gave her a 2nd generation tree, knowing it would be used to help Seina in his quest.

It's an interesting question whether Tsunami expected Seina to find the Statue, and whether she commanded it to accept him as its master once he did. I'm inclined to say "no" and "yes" respectively, but I sure can't prove either of those.

Posted by: Steven Den Beste at January 26, 2009 01:42 PM (+rSRq)

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I should note that people who have taken a look at the GXP novels Kajishima did have noted there is a lot less Nabeshin in them - not unexpected, since he apparently came into the production after it was well under way.

As for:

Also, technically Tsunami's bargain with Jurai comes to conclusion when she found Tenchi as the power she and her sisters were looking for.  Anything else beyond that point is entirely up to her own will, which granted is inclined toward continuing the bargain.

Furthermore, Washu has manipulated the galactic politics toward her desired viewpoint before.  See Galactic Academy - Origins of:.  It is not a stretch that if she feels she has to, that she will do it again.

Posted by: cxt217 at January 26, 2009 05:04 PM (ypRP3)

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I didn't realize there were any novels. Were those written before or after the anime was created? I've always assumed that TM:GXP was created out of whole cloth by the anime development team, primarily led by Nabeshin.

Whose fingerprints are all over the story, if you know what he's like. It's clearly his show, even if it is placed in a situation created by someone else.

Posted by: Steven Den Beste at January 26, 2009 05:38 PM (+rSRq)

12 GXP is has Nabeshin's fingerprints all over the place, yes, and it's mostly good. (Less good with NB, but honestly, I like Nabeshin's work enough not to mind his self-inserts too much). Kajishima has lots of interesting ideas, but he doesn't seem to have a lot of literary focus and sometimes seems to go off on tangents. Nabeshin's presence took care of that problem, giving GXP lots of coherence and an excellent, consistent pace. ( After having seen Excel Saga, seeing Nabeshin as the bringer of coherence is a bit of a shock, but there you go. )
This may be different in the novels, but I can't know because they will probably never be seen in English. Translating novels is said to be an entirely different beast from translating anime or manga, and nobody's yet made an attempt at the three novels Kajishima wrote fleshing out the Tenchiverse ages ago now.
As for before or after; the first was written after the show ended, and more are still being produced. There seems to be a lot of elucidation and extra material in there, which is good because Seina didn't have a weird enough life already.
Poor guy.



Some of these things will probably be looked at in Seikishi Monogatari, an upcoming anime focusing on Tenchi's half-brother, who is still being carried by Katsuhito's new wife as of GXP episode 17. It'll be interesting to see - if we get to - how Tenchi and Seina have changed in the intervening decade or so.

Posted by: Xivilai at January 26, 2009 09:03 PM (IQij+)

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The way I heard it, the brother gets whisked away to an alternate reality in the first episode and never comes back. Any appearance by established characters will be minimal at best, just cameos at the beginning.

I'm sure that new series is going to reek.

(Which brings us full circle, because it was Ubu's post about the new series which inspired his post about GXP, and then mine.)

Posted by: Steven Den Beste at January 26, 2009 09:09 PM (+rSRq)

14 Xivali: do I understand you to mean one or more of the novels shed light on Seina's situation, or are they all about Tenchi?  If the former, can you add anything to what we know?

Posted by: ubu at January 27, 2009 07:20 AM (i7ZAU)

15 Ubu: The GXP novels are likely to shed light on Seina's situation; after four of them, Seina hasn't even gotten his first command yet, so there's lots more being packed in there than in the anime. I don't know how densely packed they are (they're coming out pretty quickly, so I'm assuming 'light novels'), but I'm guessing there's lots of exposition coming in there. I don't actually know much of anything about the GXP novels, mind, because I can't read Japanese yet - all I have to go on is material from other fans. Well, that and scans of the interior illustrations.
As a note, none of the novels have been about Tenchi himself to date. The GXP novels are about Our Man Seina (of course), and the others are about the pasts of Azusa, Yosho, and Washu, respectively.

Posted by: Xivilai at January 27, 2009 07:06 PM (IQij+)

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Kajishima himself might have problems focusing any any particular set of ideas, but he has been (From interviews he has done.) working on the story for TMR for the better part of a decade before he started the first one.  So I think he has a lot of the background material down pat.

For that matter, all of his non-hentai (He has at least two hentai titles to his credit, besides the NSFW stuff he has in his doujinshi.) work since TMR OVA 1 has been done with Yosuke Kuroda, who is very prominent in anime now.  If Kajishima lacks certain focus, Kuroda certainly does not - I doubt they or AIC needed Nabeshin to get any more focus with GXP, all the more so since Nabeshin was not part of the production at the start.

C.T.

Posted by: cxt217 at January 27, 2009 08:13 PM (ypRP3)

17 Thanks, Xivilai.  (Spelled it right this time!)

Posted by: ubu at January 27, 2009 10:05 PM (aztRh)

18 ...nobody's yet made an attempt at the three novels Kajishima wrote fleshing out the Tenchiverse ages ago now.

Not so, Xivilai. This link is ancient.

The engrish and page structure are sketchy, but functionally it works as a translation. You just have to be willing to absorb the novels out of order from the original text. It's no professional translation, but it's better than nothing.

Posted by: Will at January 28, 2009 01:35 PM (WnBa/)

19 Will: Actually, I've been aware of Tatsumingo's translation for some time now, but from what I hear it's more a summary than a depth translation of the books. But you're right; it definitely is better than nothing.
( Thanks for the link anyway, mind - if I hadn't already read it, it'd be hog heaven for me. )

Posted by: Xivilai at January 29, 2009 06:23 AM (IQij+)

20 Will: thanks for linking it... good stuff; it explains some of Ryoko's background too, and some scenes I'd seen of the first OVA series but not understood at the time (Tusnami and Sasami's merger, for instance, and why I thought she was merged with a tree, rather than one of the 3 sisters.)

Posted by: ubu at January 29, 2009 11:09 AM (i7ZAU)

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